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  Timothy Eterno • Dec 12, 2016 at 11:10 am

  Haha, I’m a sucker for simple humor. I love the punchlines and the personalities of the charcaters. If there’s one tidbit I could advise, it would be to make the charcaters less stiff and stagnant, make their expressions and bodies more fluent and expressive. I’m down for the manga style, but maybe it’d be a good idea to go past the initial white eyed surprise expression, or the rage forehead lines, or even just the default manga eyes. You know, make the style more into your own. Overall, I’m loving it, and I’m totally looking forward to seeing what comes out of this series. 🙂

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  Noah Buchholtz • Nov 11, 2016 at 10:24 am

  This was a extremely good little comic. I want more of this short humor

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